Wednesday, September 30, 2015

Week 6 Storytelling: The Fey Dance The Night Away

(Image by: Enchanted Ways)

The Fey Dance The Night Away
It wasn’t the first time that my mom threw a plate at me, it was the first time I threw one back at her. I didn’t want to find out what she was going to throw at me next, and that’s why I ran away from home.

Running out the back door, I could still hearing her screaming, so I kept running. I ran through the backyard, and into the woods behind our house. Tears blurred my vision, and I didn’t stop until I couldn’t hear her screams.

I finally looked around me, and away from the streetlights and porch lights, it was the darkest night I had ever seen. I could only see the faint grey shapes of trees.

I was lost, and as much as it frightened me, I also felt at ease. The forest seemed safer than my mother did.

I took a few steps, deeper into the forest, and that’s when I heard faint music! Flutes and drums and accordions playing somewhere in the distance.

I thought maybe I was going insane, but, what did I have to loose?

I wandered forward, and the music got louder. I saw light through the branches, and that lanterns hung on tree branches and illuminated the area.

There was a large circular clearing where the grass and brush was worn down. In the clearing was a party.

There were creatures dancing all around. They were beautiful. Some had a pale skin tone, that seemed to glitter under the lantern light, and others had skin in hues of green and purple and blue. All of them had wings like dragonflies on their backs.

On the edge of the circle, five of the creatures were playing music.

I realized that they were of the fey. But these faeries were unlike any faeries that I had heard of. These were as tall as humans.

Only one of them seemed to notice me, and he was the most gorgeous boy I had ever seen, though, he was no boy. He was definitely a faerie.

He had a cascade of wild black hair that fell in waves along his shoulders. His skin was pale, but glittered with gold glints, and he had large golden-tinted wings on his back. He wore an open brown vest, and a pair of loose brown pants that ended in a ragged edges at his knees.

I walked out of the trees, and some of the others noticed me.

“Join us! Join us!” Some of them cried out.

My first thought was that I didn’t know how to dance, and then my second thought was that I wasn’t sure if any of this was real at all.

But, then the gorgeous faerie boy stepped out of the circle, and he held out his hand with a wide smile on his face. “Dance with me, lovely.”

It wasn’t a question, but I’m sure he knew the answer.

I took his hand, and it felt so warm in my hand, and the heat radiated throughout my body. It was such a welcome feeling from the cold, dark forest that I was in moments ago.

“What is your name, lovely?” He asked me.

“Mara,” I told him. “And, you?”

“I’d tell you, but then I’d have to kill you,” he said with a wink, and I felt a chill run across my skin.

He pulled me into the circle, and I was in the middle of the raucous crowd of dancing faeries. His hand still held one of mine, and the other was around my waist.

Before I could wrap my arm around his waist, someone passed a cup to me.

The liquid in the cup glowed yellow like the sun, and smelled sweetly. I took a sip, and then another, and soon the cup was empty. It tasted like honey, and sugar cookies, and warm summer days.

I was given another cup, but the boy took it from me. “You can’t drink too much, else you won’t make it through this night.”

“But it was so good," I whined. “I want more. I need more.”

“If it is misfortune that you wish,” he said, and handed the drink back to me.

I gulped it down, and soon the cup had emptied, and I tossed it to the ground.

My head felt light, but my feet felt lighter. I felt like I could dance the night away.

This night was amazing, I wanted to remember this night, each and every moment, and I never wanted to leave, and I realized I had said all of those things out loud.

“Well, then we shall not waste a moment,” he said, and he spun me around, and soon we were lifting off of the ground, dancing in the air thanks to his wings.
We danced for a while before we landed to the ground.

I broke away from his grasp, spinning around, and around on my own accord.

I stole a cup of the glowing drink from a faerie, and I drank it so fast that it dribbled down the sides of my mouth.

Everything blurred around me.

My feet were not my own, they were a slave to the flutes and drums and accordion music.

I don’t know how long I danced until my legs ached, and I needed to catch my breath, but I couldn’t stop dancing. But, at the same time all I wanted to do was dance.

I kept dancing, around, and around, and around again until I felt my body giving out from under me. Dawn peaked out from behind the trees, and I fell to the ground.

My eyes closed on their own. My breath was sallow, and I realized that I was dying.

“She shouldn’t have drank so much of our nectar,” I heard someone say.

“Greedy, greedy.”

“Not the first.”

“Won’t be the last.”

I felt a hand on mine, and I weakly opened my eyes to see the faerie boy.

“I am sorry, lovely. But, you didn’t listen.”

He kissed my lips before everything went black.

THE END

Author’s Note:
This week I read the Chinese Fairy Tales. I was inspired by the story, "The Night on the Battlefield.” In this story this man comes across a village, which turns out hadn’t existed at all! That village was full of ghosts. It made me think of how faeries are known for partying, and what if a girl came across a faerie party?

I was also inspired by my Extra Reading from last week, which was of Welsh Fairy Tales, and I learned about Fairy Rings. It’s supposedly a ring made in the grass from the faeries dancing around! So, that is why the faeries are partying in a big circle In the clearing.

This was originally going to be a happy, sappy, Young Adult Paranormal Romance where the girl gets the pretty faerie boyfriend. As you see that did not end up happening. I decided to take a more fairy tale approach. So, Mara has been too greedy, and so, as in the case of many fairy tale, she is punished, unfortunately by death. A little harsh, I know, but so were so many of the Chinese Fairy Tales that I read this week!

Also, remember the whole bit where Mara asks the faerie boy for his name and he says, “I’d tell you, but then I’d have to kill you.”? This is because it’s said that names are very sacred to faeries, and if you know their name you can hold power over them. I just wanted to give a nod to that interesting piece of faerie mythology.

On a final note, you have noticed that I spell it as “faerie” unless referring to “fairy tales”. This is because the term “fairy” is usually in reference to cutesy, childish, Tinkerbell sort of creatures.  On the other hand, “faerie” refers to the more human-like faeries that are seen in Young Adult Novels like Holly Black’s The Darkest Part of the Forest or Melissa Marr's Wicked Lovely Series. These are also seen in the Adult series by  Laurel K. Hamilton’s Merry Gentry Series, or the TV show Lost Girl.


Tuesday, September 29, 2015

Week 6 Reading Diary B: Chinese Fairy Tales

Myth-Folklore Unit: Reading Diary B
(Yang Gui Fe)
Reading B:

1. The Little Hunting Dog
  • Tiny knights, which as per usual, remind me of faeries. Story idea: depressed girl is visited by a group of tiny faeries who want to take her away to the land of the Fey. She is actually fae, and so she becomes the princess.
  • Hunting falcons
  • The faeries left behind a tiny hunting dog (Well, technically they're not actually faeries in this story, but I imagine them as faeries.)
  • A sad ending. What if you sat or stepped on your tiny fairy friend?
2. Fox-Fire
  • Fox blowing out the elixir of life
  • A howling at the moon image
  • Abilities to be invisible, see ghosts and devils, and things of the spirit world as a result of swallowing Fox-Fire.
  • After many years, one's magic is taken away
3. The Talking Silver Foxes
  • A mountain shaped like a tower, called Tower Mountain.
  • Burning paper to get what you desire
  • A cave full of talking foxes
  • Get money now for something, or get rewarded more later. (In the story he chose the latter.)
4. Retribution
  • Being haunted by a ghost, and eventually meeting the same sad fate as the ghost.
5. The Night on the Battlefield
  • Taking apart one's body, reminds me of Frankenstein.
  • The village was never there! It was all a ghostly apparition, really cool. Awesome story idea: someone wanders into a town, where things are a bit off. Something cares them, they run away to the next town, and discover that there is no town! Or what if the town is actually a town from the land of the Fey with a huge Fey party. It only appears every so often, that's how they saw it. 
6. The Maiden Who Was Stolen Away
  • Being carried away by the winds and finding a young man.
  • The suitor returning to win the lady's love
  • Alas, the young man is an ogre, or some other fearsome creature. (Reverse Beauty and the Beast)
7. The Flying Ogre
  • A messenger in the sky
  • Living in a tree
  • A rain of blood
8. The Sorcerer of the White Lotus Lodge
  • Advised not to look into a bowl (or a box.)
  • Mountain spirit
9. The Three Evils
  • Three evils in a village: a dragon, a tiger, and an ordinary man (who is obviously not so ordinary.)
10. How the River God's Wedding Was Broken Off
  • Every year a God looks for a wife. (What if it's a vampire, who looks for a human bride every year, but she always dies. Or a faerie king looks for a human bride once a year, but humans cannot live in the land of the fey, and so each of his bride's die. The new bride finds out about this and tries to escape!)
11. Yang Gui Fe
  • A beguiling and enchanting woman. Maybe she is a sorceress or of the fey.
  • Going to heaven, and hell, and the fairyland
  • Sky-fairy
  • A ring as a promise between two lovers. (Story idea: between a human and a fey, but then one of them looses the ring.)

Monday, September 28, 2015

Reading Diary A: Chinese Fairy Tales

Reading Diary A: Chinese Fairy Tales

(Twin Dragons, Luck)

READING A:
1. The Favorite of Fortune and the Child of Ill Luck
  • A line-up of suitors
  • Throwing an object at the one you like
  • Dragons as a good sign
  • Rags to riches motif, the beggar becomes the emperor, a timeless trope
  • Role reversal, the princess is now the pauper, and the pauper is the prince
  • This feels sort of Princess Bride-esque
  • Well, they sure know how to make a sad ending!
2. The Cave of the Beasts
  • Being abandoned by a parent over something mundane, talk about a sad back story for a character. What if he intended the children to be eaten by wolves, but are instead raised by wolves?
  • I think that this story deserved a more sad ending. There was no rhyme or reason. I don't see why the fox and wolf had to die. I would have liked it if the fox and wolf became their new parents. 
  • Themes: guilt, survival, rage/wrath
  • The children should have been the only ones to receive all the treasures, and then risen above their family. That way they could have been more spiteful for the father. The ending was wrapped up much too nicely.
3. The Panther
  • This is literally just little red riding hood, and just like the wolf, the panther did not survive. 
4. Why Dog and Cat are Enemies
  • Magic ring (makes me think of Lord of the Rings,) this ring makes it so you always have enough to live on. (Very appealing to me as a college student!)
  • I don't like talking animals in stories
  • It was okay in the end, I like origin stories. 
  • The idea of this story could be made into an original story of why Vampires and Werewolves are enemies!
5. Yang Oerlang
  • Wife is secretly a goddess
  • Ability to be invisible or turn into birds, beasts, grass, flowers, snakes, or fishes.
  • Ability to empty seas or mountain and move them.
  • The Goddess is allergic to sunlight, is this why vampires are allergic to sunlight? They were once Gods or Goddesses?
  • Turned into a God
6. The Lady of the Moon
  • Herb of immortality
  • The land of the moon
  • The Queen of the Moon
  • Majestic, Magical, Beautiful
7. The Girl with the Horse’s Head or the Silkworm Goddess
  • Making false promises
  • Promising to marry someone on a condition, but not following through with the promise.
  • More punishments by deaths. 
  • These stories are quite harsh. I'm not sure if they're really getting poetic justice, or just given unfair punishments.
8. The God of War
  • Interesting description. (Though, I've noticed that they describe the Gods, but not the Goddesses)
  • Protector against demons and foxes
9. The Miserly Farmer
  • Growing more, before consuming more. This is a deep concept.
10. The King of the Ants
  • Tiny people, as per usual, reminds me of faeries.
  • Makes me think of a story where faeries invite a human to have a great feast with them.
  • Once again, a punishment that I'm not sure was called for.

Thoughts About Comments

Well, I obviously enjoy getting comments that tell me what I have done is great and such. However, I found that the most helpful comments are the ones that say something like, "This is great, but it could be even greater if you do blah, blah, and blah."

Those comments are great because I get the ego boost, but I also get help! It really helps me to know if there is anything making my work weak.

The best sort of comments are those that adopt the Growth Mindset! Comments could make you grow more, challenge what you're doing, but all in an encouraging way!

I try to do this formula when I comment someone: "I liked (this, that, and the other), and this is great, but it could be greater if you do (this, that, and the other.) But, once again this was great!" (Well, of course this would go on a story that I consider to be great.

That is generally the sort of comment that I give, and also the kind of comment that I would love to recieve!


Sunday, September 27, 2015

Week 5: Curation Spaces

Wow, where do I even start? Only 3?

Truth be told, I didn't really use Pinterest before this class. But now? It is my primary curation space! I save website to it, find wonderful things to pin, pin images from websites and more!

As someone who loves Mythology, I am always amazed by the amount of great Mythology content is on Pinterest

(especially my favorite Pantheon... Well, we'll see if, by the end of this post, you can guess which is my favorite Pantheon of Gods and Goddesses!)

You can also guess who one of my favorite Gods is.

1. Norhalla
I found a great website called Norhalla. They make comics and books, but it features wonderful depictions of the Norse Gods and Goddesses.
(Thor from Norhalla)
2. UnripeHamaDryad's Norse Gods and Goddesses Artwork 
The artist UnripeHamaDryad on DeviantArt also has made incredible depictions of the Norse Gods and Goddesses. I think hers might be my favorite!
(Thor by UnripeHamaDryad)
3. Pernastudio's Mythology Cards
Pernastudio on Deviantart has also made great depictions of Norse Gods and Goddesses, and of Gods and Goddesses from other Pantheons.
(Thor from Pernastudios)
Alright, so I wasn't very subtle, was I?

My favorite Pantheon of Gods and Goddesses is indeed Norse Gods and Goddesses! And, one my favorite Gods, along with Odin, Frigga, and Freya is: Thor!

Week 5: Review

Favorite Thing From Today's Announcement:
(Image from: Laura Gibbs)

Why It's My Favorite:
The question is why wouldn't it be my favorite?

My Quote of the Week:
In honor of that spectacular moon from tonight:
Image made by me and is on my Blog

Week 5: Growth Mindset

This week I did the Growth Mindset Writing Challenge with this week's Storytelling post.

I fell in love with the cumulative tale, The Sad Tale of the Mouse's Tail, and so I wanted to make my own cumulative tale (something that I have never done!)

So, I wrote the cumulative tale, The Little Witch's Mabon.

It was a little scary, and even when it was done I wasn't sure if it was good, but it was a great experience. And, now I am in fact quite proud of my story! I'm really glad that I decided to challenge myself.

(Image from: Growth Mindset Memes)

Week 5: Famous Last Words

My Reading This Week:
I was happy with my reading this week. I was able to understand the stories quite well, and I really enjoyed the Persian Tales. My favorite reading were the Welsh Fairy Tales that I chose for my Extra Reading, though! I fell in love with the idea of a fairy circle. In fact, I may have found one in my backyard!
Possible Fairy Circle? Photo Taken by ME.
My Best Writing this Week:
My best writing this week was my storytelling post this week. Unfortunately once again, I've been too tired, and too busy to write my novel. But, I did write a really good mystery/suspense short story for my mystery/suspense class!

Other People's Writing:
I learned to keep things simple. Sometimes simplicity is a better thing! I am finding this more and more.

My Other Classes:
My other classes were incredibly stressful. I had two short stories, one essay, one book to read, and some ones's novel to edit. Oh, and I had to keep up with my Vegan Food Blog. Cook dinners, desserts, and somehow find time to just relax--which I am finding I am unable to do more and more. But I am hanging in there!

Something Cool I Found:
The Super Blood Moon was tonight, and it was truly amazing. I sat and watched it from when it rose to the sky, peaked at it's fullest, and then ever so slowly became eclipsed. It was truly an incredible experience, and an experience I won't get again for another 30 years. I am okay with that, because I will hold these memories strong. I really never will forget it. It's sort of like Haley's Comet, it sticks with you. I also made moon cakes for the occasion (,vegan-ized of course) and they were great. I reccomend making them every Full Moon for a mini-celebration! 

Thursday, September 24, 2015

Extra Reading Diary: Welsh Fairy Tales (Emerson)

Myth-Folklore Unit: Welsh Fairy Tales (Emerson)
(Fairy Ring Image by: The Poss)
READING A:
1. The Fairies of Caragonan
  • Fairy ring! I've never heard of this, and it is so awesome! 
  • The teenage daughter of a fairy queen
  • Fairies that can turn into birds
  • Witches, that clearly use Black Magic, harming humans
  • Fairies helping humans who are under a curse or an evil spell. (Modern day version, it could be an agency that specializes in this)
  • Building a fairy ring
  • Using a blot of perfume and song as a spell (the perfume must be like a potion)
The Fairies of Caragonan (cont.)
  • The fairy circle is made with a pole, mirror, and tape. It sounds a lot like a maypole.
  •  Turn around three times and see something in the mirror
  • Killing the "wicked witch"
  • Follow what the fairies say, and you will be rewarded tenfold.
Three Short Tales of Fairies
  • Listen to what the fairies say, they just want to be heard
  • If you don't do what fairies say, there will be punishment
  • Baby-farming is not as disturbing as I thought it would be. In fact is basically just a daycare.
  • Dressing favorite kids in good clothes, and the others in rags
  • The well-dressed children turned to fairies
The Old Man and the Fairies
  • Fairies dance under the moonlight and create fairy circles.
  • Being spirited away by the fairies, in your sleep, to a fairy party
  • Given gold by fairies, and it turns to cockle-shells 
  • Given money many times, and then finally only given cockle-shells
  • Fairies coming through keyholes
  • The fairies will turn on you. They will give you presents, but then give you something less than desired.
The Story of Gelert
  • Having a set of hounds, and your favorite dying
  • Going hunting (for mystical creatures would be interesting)
  • Hills inhabited by wolves (and werewolves?)
Origin of the Welsh
  • Birds as warfare (Like the movie The Birds!)
  • Turn the birds into fairies
  • Fairies only visiting humans once a year. They live deep in the Earth and in caves.
  • Spell only working 2,000 years
  • Welsh were the first to settle into Britain.
Crows
  • "One black crow, bad luck for me.
    Two black crows, good luck for me.
    Three black crows, a son shall be born in the family.
    Four black crows, a daughter shall be born in the family.
    Five black crows shall be a funeral in the family.
    Six black crows, if they fly head on, a sudden death.
    Seven black crows with their tails towards you, death within seven years." Source: Welsh Tales (Emerson)
  • Coffins
  • Prophetic dreams
The Fairy of the Dell
  • Fairies fought Evil Witches who practiced black magic (I keep specifying this because there are Good Witches who practice white magic!)
  • Holding wands and flowers
  • A crown of flowers for the fairy queen
  • "The Black Art" as an evil Spellbook
  • I like the songs they sang
The Fairy of the Dell (cont.)
  • Destroying an evil Spellbook releases demons
  • Mirror magic, mirror spells
  • Possession by evil spirits
  • A magic fairy ring that says if she queen is dead or alive
  • Fairies die when their power is gone. They forever look youthful.


Wednesday, September 23, 2015

Week 5 Storytelling: The Little Witch's Mabon

(Halloween Witch Painting Blythe Insprited by Noelle)

Once upon a Mabon, the Little Witch and her Mother started to make the feast for the Sabbat. But when she started to make the Mabon Apple Bread, she was dismayed to find that she had no Apples.

"Little Witch, Little Witch, I need Apples for my Mabon Apple Bread," her Mother told her.

"Yes, Mother, I'll go to the Market to get them for you," said the Little Witch.

So, the Little Witch, went to the Market to get a couple of Apples, and found the Apple Stand.

"Apple Vendor, Apple Vendor, I need a couple of Apples," said the Little Witch.

"I am out of apples, Little Witch," he told her. "Go to the Orchard and get Apples from my Apple Picker, and bring some for me too."

So, the Little Witch ran to the Orchard and found the Apple Picker.

"Apple Picker, Apple Picker, I need a couple of Apples," said the Little Witch.

"I will give you my Apples, but first I need a Basket from the Basket Weaver," the Apple Picker told her.

So, the Little Witch went back to the Market, and found the Basket Weaver.

"Basket Weaver, Basket Weaver, I need a Basket," said the Little Witch.

"I will give you a Basket, but I first need Straw from the Farmer to weave it," the Weaver told her.

So, the Little Witch went to Farm nearby, and found the Farmer.

"Farmer, Farmer, I need Straw," said the Little Witch.

"I will give you Straw, but first I need a Sickle from the Blacksmith to cut the Straw," the Farmer told her.

So, the Little Witch went to the Blacksmith Shop and found the Blacksmith.

"Blacksmith, Blacksmith, I need a Sickle," said the Little Witch.

"I will give you a sickle, but first I need Iron from the Miner to forge the Sickle," the Blacksmith told her.

So, the Little Witch went down into the Mintes and found a Miner.

"Miner, Miner, I need Iron," said the Little Witch.

"You are in luck. I have just mined a cart full of Iron," he told her. "Here you go, Little Witch."

So, the Little Witch went: to the Blacksmith who forged her a Sickle with the Iron, to the Farmer who cut the Straw with the Sickle, to the Weaver who weaved a Basket with the Straw, to the Apple Picker who placed a couple of Apples in the Basket, to the Apple Vender to bring him some Apples.

And then finally, the Little Witch went home and gave her Mother the Basket full of Apples.

Her Mother thanked her, and started to make the Mabon Apple Bread.

"Oh no!" Her Mother exclaimed. "We're out of Flour!"

The End

Author's Note:
I based my story off of the cumulative tale, The Sad Tale of the Mouse's Tale. If you aren't familiar with a cumulative story, well, you should have a pretty good idea of how that works after reading my story. I have never written something like this, so it was definitely a Growth Mindset challenge for me! My usual things are first-person fantasy involving Vampires or Faeries. But, as you see, I didn't stray too far as far as characters go. Today is the Pagan (and therefore Wiccan) holiday of Mabon! It celebreates the second harvest, and is basically a Pagan/Wiccan Thanksgiving. With this holiday or Sabbat as it is called by Pagans/Wiccans, I thought of a Mabon-themed cumulative tale! This was a lot of fun to write. I do feel bad for the bittersweet ending, but I had to kind of keep in the spirit of the story that I based it on!

Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Reading Diary B: Persian Tales

Myth-Folklore Unit: Persian Tales
(Image from: Laura Gibbs)

READING B:

  • Flute as a mating call of sorts
  • The handsome man gets the fair maiden
  • Turning into a pidgeon
  • Going somewhee every day waiting for your love. (Would make a great story. A man sitting on a rock playing a flute or something else like a guitar, waiting for someone who will never come.)
The Hemp-Smoker's Dream
  • This was hardly a story.
  • The age old, "and it was all a dream..." (a trope that I am not a fan of.)
The Story of the Wolf-Bride
  • Ominous prophecy
  • Girl doesn't know she's a werewolf, turns into a wolf and with uncontrollable powers, devours her husband. Thus, the prophecy is fulfilled.
  • Whatever is willed by fate, so be it.
  • I feel like the girl should have recieved punishment, like she killed her husband, people! We can't all just laugh about it.
The Man Who Went to Wake His Luck
  • A person, personifying Luck
  • Thorn gatherer. Why are so many people gathering thorns in these stories? What do they do with these thorns? Maybe it would be part of a magical potion or something. Or be the only defense against dragons, like they mount the thorns on swords.
  • Truly gullible people
Tortoise Bowl-On-The-Back and the Fox
  • Saying things with ulterior motives. This would work great in a story with faeries. They say things to help a human, and then one day come back and say, hey where's my reward? Great concept.
  • Everyone who is greedy is put to shame
The Shepherd Who Found a Treasure
  • Discovering treasures for dreams. Trading dreams for payment. Could be someone's job in a story, like the dream keeper or something.
The Merchant and the Saffron
  • Easy come, easy go
  • Regaining your luck slowly, but surely
Shah Abbas and the Poor Mother
  • Someone thinks they are helping, but they bring great misfortune.
  • Magic rings
  • The punishment seemed way extreme. Like I know he arrested this woman under false pretenses, but I don't know if he deserved to die. I mean, it is awful how all the time people get wrongfully convicted nowaways, and the people who arrested them don't recieve any punishment. But, the death penality seems a little steep, don't you think?
The Apparition of the Prophet Khizr
  • A figure coming to those in hard times. Which, I suppose is the case in most religions. In a more supernatural thought, this figure could be a faerie, a witch, a wizard, or an oracle. Some kind of mystical knight that visits damsels in distress, they seem to come from no where and then disapear.
The Story of the Baker and the Grateful Fish
  • Giving offerings to nature pays off. Another story idea with a girl giving offerings to the faeries, and one day when she is in grave danger, they show up and help her out. Or someone who appreciates and takes care of trees, is saved by tree people.
  • Feeding animals, and those animals help you out in a time of turmoil
  • Nature will reward you

Monday, September 21, 2015

Reading Diary A: Persian Tales

Reading Unit: Persian Tales


(Image by: Jimmy Alvarez)

READING A:

1. The Wolf and the Goat
  • This starts out like The Little Red Riding Hood or the Three Little Pigs (don't trust the wolf.)
  • I like the rhyming that it has in dialogue. It feels like this would be well performed by a Bard.
  • Well that escalated quickly.
  • I'm not sure if there was poetic justice or a moral? I guess the moral is don't trust the wolf, and kill or be killed.
2. The City of Nothing-in-the-World
  • Do they call start with the "once upon a time when there was no one but God"? I find this interesting, because I thought that in these time periods the people were polytheistic.
  • A Minaret is a conical architechtual feature.
  • Tree growing from an animal.
  • Haleem is a stew.
  • The sparrow is never getting home, apparently. Is this how they say "The End"?
3. Susku and Mushu
  • Once again, this escaltes quickly. She suddenly gets marriage proposals.
  • My question is why would you not want to sleep on dates, they are delicious!
  • That was cute when he says she can sleep in his arms.
  • This cumulative narrative is really cool! I might try this out. It has a cause and effect sort of well, effect, to it.
4. The Boy Who Became a Bulbul
  • Thorn bushes for firewood. Ones profession is a thorn-cutter.
  • Could be  a modern horror or murder mystery. Dad kills the son because he lost the bet, has his step-wife boil his son into a soup, and the daughter finds her brother's bones in the soup.
  • Once again interesting lyrical intermissions of sorts.
5. The Wolf-Aunt
  • Were-shewolf
  • Thorn bush gathering
  • She seems to be seducing him? "The temptress"!
  • She tricks them, fattens them up, and intends to eat them (since she can turn into a wolf.)
  • Once again, never trust the wolf.
  • Interesting take on werewolves.
6. Nim Tanak, or Half-Boy
  • Daevas, false Gods, feel like demons.
  • Short lyrical sentences
  • How one eats or drinks determines fates
  • One being half a person, literally
7. Muhammad Tirandaz, The Archer
  • Tirandaz meaning "Arrow-shooter", I like when the name of characters holds meanings. I usually try to do this in my own stories.
  • Boasting and exagurating one's deeds
  • Pretending to be someone that you're not
8. The Praying Baker
  • Royality dressing up as a pauper
  • Going back on deals
  • Positivity is rewarded with great fortune
  • Sometimes it's okay to have a happy ending!
10. The Sad Tale of the Mouse's Tail
  • One task leading to another and another. Could make an interesting Short Story. Perhaps a magic user needs ingredients for a spell, and has to jump through a bunch of hoops like the mouse does.
  • I liked the frustration at the end, you could tell that the mouse was fed up!


Week 4: Review

Favorite Thing From Today's Announcement:
(Image from: Laura Gibbs)

Why It's My Favorite:

I like to think there are lake monsters in the USA, let alone the world. It makes reality more interesting! If you're wondering, yes I do believe in the Loch Ness Monster!

My Quote of the Week:
"We all have our time machines, don't we. Those that take us bck are memories...And those that carry is forward, are dreams."
-H.G. Wells
(Quote source: GoodReads)

Sunday, September 20, 2015

Famous Last Words: Rare Moon Event!

My Reading This Week:
I was happy with my reading this week. I tried to slow down and really pay attention to each story! I do think I could improve my Reading Diaries though. A classmate of mine told me that I should separate the notes into the different sections of the myths, and I thought that was a great idea! To be honest, I'm not sure why I haven't been doing that all along!

My Best Writing this Week:
My best writing this week was my storytelling post this week. Unfortunately I have been too tired, and too busy to write my novel.

Other People's Writing:
I am reminded to check for typos, which is something I always seem to miss--even if I look over it a couple of times!

I did notice people's stories are shorter, and that goes in with my Growth Mindset post this week. So, I'm going to try to write more concisely. My literary idol, Ernest Hemingway would certainly approve.

My Other Classes:
My other classes are stressful, as always, but I'm hanging in there. There's just always something to do, no not just something, someTHINGS. There is always something to do, and even if my homework it done, I still have my novel to write! Oh, and then that little thing called spare time. Something that I am forgetting about more and more.

Something Cool I Found:
On Sunday, September 27th there will be a Full Moon. But, not just any Full Moon. It'll be a Supermoon (bigger, and higher in the sky.) That's not all! It'll also be a Lunar Eclipse. So,  there will be a Supermoon and a Lunar Eclipse on the same night! This only happens every 30 years, and the last time was in 1982

I encourage you to go check it out! After All, it won't happen again until 2033! Read more about this awesome astronomical event here.

(Image from: PixaBay)


Tech Tip #4: Revamping My Google Site

(You will soon see the pun in the title.)

This week I made my Google Site for my Storybook, and I was very excited! I've never made a Google Site, and I thought it was really cool.

I'm also really excited about my Storybook theme: Vampires! (Now do you get the pun in the title.)

Anyways, so for this week's Tech Tip, I played around with my title and headers!

My biggest challenge was with making a logo! I used QuotesCreater (an app on the iPad, as I do all of my work on my iPad.)

I had to do a lot of messing around and such to figure out how to get the logo perfectly placed, but finally got it working.

It wasn't as hard as I thought it would be to fix up the page! It's not perfect, but I'm really happy with the result so far! I can't wait to do more work on my Project!

Here's how my page looks so far:



Week 4: Growth Mindset

This week for my Growth Mindset I practiced something that I struggle with! This is something that is usually the opposite of most people's problems when it comes to writing. The problem? Writing too much!

This week I turned in my Storytelling post, and did not realize until Laura e-mailed me, that I had written far over the word count!

So to challenge myself, I cut the story down to a little less than 1,000 words! I'm actually really proud of myself that I was able to do that, since I think every word is precious in a story, and it's literally a bit painful to cut the words out!

This is an important thing to learn however, especially since I am a Professional Writer. There will be times that my Editor will tell me to cut certain things out of my novel. Or if I want to publish a short story I'll have to go by their required word count.

The point is, that this week's Growth Mindset was extremely helpful for me, and I may have to do this challenge a few times!
(Image by: Laura Gibbs)

I was definitely out of my comfort zone this week, when I tightened up my story--but I have to admit, the story was better after editing!

Week 4 Curation: My Mythology Finds

This week I found a couple of really neat things, that I wanted to share with you! I am thrilled about all three of my finds, and I hope you will be too!

1. Norse God and Goddess Cards

I found these on Pinterest. These pertain to the Norse Gods, I haven't seen ones for other pantheons--do let me know if you find some!

Check out my Pinterest Board for all the Norse God cards!

The way I used these is, I printed them out, cut them out, and then each day I select a God or Goddess and read about them! It's a bite-sized way to learn about a particular God or Goddess each day!

If you really want to learn about Gods or Goddesses of a particular culture, then I highly recommend doing something similar.

2. Mabon: the holiday, the God, and the Myth!

The Autumnal Equinox is this Wednesday (9/23), which means it is also the Wiccan or Pagan holiday of Mabon!

The interesting thing about Mabon is that Mabon is actually a Welsh God. In fact, he is basically a male version of Persephone!

I found a little guide on Pinterest to the holiday, Mabon, including the interesting (and little known) myth of the Welsh God, Mabon:
(Image from: Nature Bound Pagan

Check out this website and this website to learn more about the myth of Mabon.

3. Mythology Memes

I was so excited to find more of those Mythology Aesthetics! Apparently they are now being called Mythology Memes, how awesome is that?

Here is one I found on Pinterest of the lovely, to say the least, Goddess Freya:

(Image from: Disa)
I have confirmed that if you search for "mythology memes" on Tumblr or Pinterest that you will find MANY of these for all different Gods and Goddesses of many pantheons.

I'm so excited to have found this, because they are just truly stunning and they capture the essence of the Gods or Goddesses depicted.




Thursday, September 17, 2015

Week 4 Extra Reading Diary: Ovid's Metamorphosis Books 5-7 Reading B

Ovid's Metamorphoses Books 5-7

(Madea, by Evelyn de Morgan)
I read Reading A last week for my Extra Reading Diary, so I decided to finish that unit up, with Reading B! (Can you tell that I'm enjoying reading Ovid?)

READING B:
  1. Tereus Married Procne
  2. Tereus Rapes Philomela
  3. Procne's Revenge
  4. Medea and Jason
  5. Jason and the Golden Fleeze
  6. Medea's Spell
  7. Aeson Rejuvenated
  8. Medea and Pelias

Reading Diary:

  • The whole Tereus business was very strange. There just didn't seem to be much rhyme or reason to it. In fact it read like the point of view of a murderer from a crime show or something! I mean, that's literally what he did. He committed a sexual misconduct, and then murdered, and dismembered her body, it sounded just like something I've seen on the Investigation Discovery Channel (a channel that only plays shows about true crime.)
  • "The sun god has circled the twelve signs, and a year has passed" GREAT line.
  • "Now is not a time for tears, but for the sword" Another great line.
  • Procne and Philomena turning into a Nightingale and a swallow
  • The idea of Gods opposing you
  • The part with Madea was cute. It reminded me of a Young Adult skewing younger (like 12-13), of a girl's first crush. The whole "do I tell him or don't I?" I think I liked it the most because it felt like such a modern concept, but apparently even in the Ancients struggled with this dilemma!
  • Calming a dragon (which I am under the impression is most definitely not an easy task!)
  • The incantations and invocations of the spell was really cool. 
  • How the spell brought down a chariot that she could ride to collect the right herbs.
  • Concept of giving your years to someone else.
  • Using a cauldron.
  • I am assuming that Madea is some sort of witch? (or was using magic more common in the Ancient days?)
  • Maenads are the female followers of Dionysus, very cool.
  • Another Modred and King Arthur sort of situation, also very Game of Thrones!
  • Draining their blood and filling it with new blood sounds so much like vampires, and how they create new vampires.

Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Week 4 Storytelling: Matty Was Missing

(Spellbook by: Eclipse_ETC)

WARNING: This story is mystery/horror. There is some graphic violence, a bit of gore, and it deals with some difficult themes. --If that's not your cup of tea, please don't read. I don't want to upset or trigger anyone.

**If it's required that you read my story, but don't want to read it, THEN read last weeks story, or the story from the week before.


Matty Was Missing

Matty was missing.

For someone who was missing, I couldn't run away from him, even if I wanted to.

We lived in a small town, where everyone knows everyone and everything. So, when Matty went missing, the missing person posts went everywhere the next day, was all the local news talked about.

Everyone had their idea of where he was. That he ran away. That he killed himself. That the serial killer, the Night Wriath, got him. Afterall, he'd killed teenage boys in the counties near us.

I shook my head at each speculation, because Matty was still alive for all we knew. 

He had to be alive...

Afterall, there was no evidence to say otherwise. All anyone knew was that Matty's blue Volkswagen Beatle was found, abandoned, in a mall parking lot. That he hadn't made any purchases since he's been missing. That I was the last person to see him.

He was happy then. It had been a full moon, and as we were both Wiccan, we did Full Moon Rituals for happiness and prosperity, and he left my house with his big smile on his face. Yeah, it was late, midnight or so, but he always left late like that.

I held onto the pentacle Matty had given me, it was on a black string, with letter beads that spelled out, "Willow", my name. 

I relied on the white magic behind Wicca. I tried every spell I could think of. I begged my Patron Goddess, Isis, to find him.

But Matty was still missing and it had been a week.

One night I fell to the ground, and I cried out, "If there is anyone out there, good, evil, help me find Matty!"

I cried a long time, and I guess I eventually fell asleep.

When I dreamt, I was in a forest that I'd never been in. I felt ike there was a string attached to me, and someone was pulling me along through the forest, until the pull stopped in a clearing.

When I looked in front of me, I screamed. 

Matty was looking at me with lifeless, white eyes, his head on the ground. The rest of his body was in pieces, scattered around me.

I jolted awake, and started to get out of bed to turn a light on, as if that would chase away the nightmare. But, when I did, I saw dirt in my bed, and covering my legs. I jumped onto the floor, and stepped away from the bed, but I wished I stayed in bed.

When I looked down, Matty's lifeless head was looking up at me, and his body was spread around him. There was a brown book next to him.

I look at Matty again, so I pushed him under my bed. I picked up the book, and saw that the title was, "Spells."

There was a piece of paper wedged in it like a bookmark, and I turned to that page. The page said, "A Spell of Resurrection." 

There was no way that this was white magic, it couldn't be.

I saw that the piece of paper read, "You're Welcome. ~Asmodeous." A demon. This was black magic.

But Matty wasn't missing. Matty was dead, and he was under my bed.

Matty was my first love, and we had two amazing years together. I needed Matty.

I had to do the spell. I had to use black magic.

The spell read, "Requirements: needle and thread, chalk, knife, five candles, and one soul."

But, if it took my soul to bring Matty back, then I would do it.

I looked down at Matty, and I closed his white eyes. I gritted my teeth as I picked up each body part and sewed Matty's body back together. 

I drew a pentagram, along with the required symbols around it. I then placed the candles on each point of the star. I lit the candles, and cut my palm, dripping blood on Matty.

In a shaky voice I read the spell outloud.

After I spoke the words, nothing happened. I sighed. I was feeling numb all over. I was like an empty shell.

Suddenly Matty's fingers twitched, and then his hands closed and opened, and then his eyes opened, no longer white, but blue and full of life!

He groaned and started to sit up.

"Matty..." I whispered. But, I saw that I was no longer in my body. I was next to my body, but when tried to touch Matty, my hand went through him.

He sat up, and the thread I had sewn him together with faded, and he was completely back to life.

He looked in horror as he saw my lifeless body. He cradled my body in his arms, screaming, "Willow!" Over and over again.

I was screaming, but he couldn't hear me.

My parents ran in, shocked, and rushed to my now, lifelfess body, being held by the now, full of life Matty.

I screamed, but no one could hear me.

The floor suddenly cracked open, with fire crackling. Matty didn't seem to see it.

A grey-skinned man with long black hair flew out of the crack on black wings. He tipped a wide brimmed hat. "Nice to meet you."

"Asmodeous," I said. "What have you done?"

"Me?" He said and laughed. "That was all you. You asked, and you received."

"But what's happened to me?"

"Well, let's see..." He snapped his fingers and the Spell Book was in his hands. He opened it to the Resurrection Spell page. "Requirements: Needle and thread, blah, blah, blah, and…OH,, and what's this? A soul."

"But, doesn't that happen when I die?"

"It happens when I want your soul, and I want your soul..." He said softly and slowly, but in a furious flap of his wings he was in front of me. His eyes were ablaze with a orange fire and he roared, "NOW!"
                                                                     END

Author's Note: First of all, sorry if this was too creepy and dark! I guess Halloween coming soon is on my mind! Secondly, Matty was murdered by the serial killer, the Night Wraith. I didn't really have room or a chance to fully explain that.

Anyways, you're probably wondering how on earth I got all of this from mythology, right? 

I chose the reading unit: Ancient Egyptian Myths and Stories

I borrowed the idea of cutting one's head off from The Tale of King Rhampsinitus. That got me thinking about how the head was going to be re-attached, and I thought of a Frankenstein sort of concept. 

The Spell Book was borrowed from The Book of Thoth. I don't know if The Book of Thoth is supposed to be good or evil. However, thinking about spells and magic made me think of good and evil magic, and the consequences of using black or evil magic. 

And, if you noticed, I snuck in that Willow's Patron Goddess is Isis, who I learned about from this week's reading unit!

This story is mostly a moral story about being careful about what you ask for. As a second moral, it warns against using black magic. I was happy that my story actually had morals, as my stories don't usually. I didn't even mean for it to have a moral--it just ended up that way!

ALSO, I was in the mood for something different today, but there will be more vampire or faerie stories soon!