Showing posts with label Week 3. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 3. Show all posts

Sunday, September 13, 2015

Week 3: Review

My Favorite Thing From The Current Announcment:

(Writer's Block from Laura Gibbs)
Why It's My Favorite:

As a writer, I constantly have to deal with writer's block. I make myself write for an hour each day (I set a timer and everything.) But, sometimes when I look at the screen and try to write this is what happens.

My Quote of the Week:

"Do. Or do not. There is no try." -Yoda

I feel like this quote is reminiscent of the Growth Mindset ideals.

Upcoming Events:

Just a friendly reminder that October 26, registration for the Fall 2016 Semester opens up. It's a good idea to get advised for that! I am getting advised this week.

Week 3: Famous Last Words

This Week's Readings:

I chose Ovid for this week's readings, and I really enjoyed reading Metamorphosis. The Reading A and B were great, but the extra reading was quite difficult. I'm not sure why it was, but it was more difficult. The only thing that I could think of is that it didn't have the notes. But, other than that I'm not sure.

This Week's Best Writing:

I really liked my story for this week's storytelling post! I already have a world in my Young Adult Novel that I have created, yes it has vampires (of course!) But I created a new world with vampires for my storytelling posts! I think that I'm going to even use the new world that I created, for my Storybook.

My Novel didn't go as smoothly this week. Reason being Labor Day Weekend. It got me off track, and I didn't write as much. I'm trying to correct that though, and I am resuming my thing where I set a timer for 1 hour and sit and write (even if I don't feel like it.)

Other People's Writing:

I noticed a lot of people didn't separate their stories into paragraphs (and so I made a few comments about that.) I was reminded of how very important it to to separate your story into paragraphs. Especially with dialogue, that always needs their own paragraphs.

My Classes:

Labor Day Weekend kind of threw me off in my other classes as well. But I'm trying to get back up into the game. As I've mentioned, my classes all have so much reading and writing, and that is hard to deal with at times. I think I'm adjusting though. Fortunately, reading and writing are my two favorite things to do.

Outside of School:
I went to Anime Fest over Labor Day Weekend, and I had a blast! It was four days long, which was awesome because conventions are usually three days long.
(Me with the Anime Fest Badge. Image is Mine)
(My Boyfriend and I at AnimeFest. Image is Mine)

Week 3: Curation

Here are the top 3 favorite things mythology-related that I found from my curation spaces: Tumblr and Pinterest!

1. The Tumblr Tag "Mythology Aesthetics".

Just go to Tumblr and search the tag, "Mythology Aesthetics". It will have beautiful images portraying Gods, Goddesses, and Themes from Mythology. A lot of these even make modern versions of myths. My favorite that I found was the Modern Mythology Aesthetic of Dionysis. The link to that is here.

2. An Anthology of Mythical Creatures:
(Image from: Pinterest)
On Pinterest I found a really cool chart with most of the mythical creatures that we know and love, or some we didn't know about!

3. Understanding the Fulgjur:

(Image from: Pinterest)
On Pinterest I also stumbled upon a Norse Myth that I didn't know about, the Fulgjur. These are evidently guardian spirits that accompany a person through life.

Week 3: Growth Mindset

Talk About Growth Mindset:

I decided to talk to my Mom about Growth Mindset, since she is an Elementary School Teacher, and I thought it would help her teaching.

It turned out that she already knew about Growth Mindset!

She's learned about it in training and in classes she's taken.

She put it that Growth Mindset is the mindset that you want to have. It's about challenging yourself and others, and not giving up. She added that she uses Growth Mindset applied to herself, and applied to the kids in her class.
(Image from Cheezburger, made by Laura Gibbs)

Week 3: Storybook Styles

Topic: Vampires

  • Working Title: "Creatures of the Night" 
(Image from: Pixabay)
Stories: The Vampire, His Kith and Kin by Montague Summers, Undead Vampires and Ghost Stories from Russia.

Bibliography: The Vampire, His Kith and Kin (1928) by Monatage Summers, Source: Sacred Texts. Undead: Vampires and Ghost Stories from Russia (1997), edited by: E.L Ashliman, Source: Pitt.

Styles:

First Person or Third Person?

  • First Person: My go-to point-of-view is always First Person, so because of that I will most likely stick with it. I like First Person because your really get into the character's head. You also really have to know your character to do First Person. You also get a better idea of the character's emotions and thoughts in First Person
  • Third Person: I've very rarely written in Third Person. It doesn't come as naturally to me. However, I do like that you're able to describe more in Third Person. Example, in First Person it wouldn't make sense for the character to describe a room in detail, since normal people don't do that in their own heads. In First Person, you can only describe key objects, whereas in Third Person you can describe anything in details.
  • First Person it is! I am used to writing in First Person. I like how I can express emotions and thoughts easier. 
Anthology or Frametale?
  • Anthology: An Anthology gives the writer more freedom. They can be stories with a common theme, that are not necessarily related.
  • Frametale: There needs to be an overarching similarity.
  • An Anthology allows freedom to write stories that are all about vampires, but aren't tied together by a mystery or something. I love to have freedom with what I write, so Anthology it is!
  • I will choose Frametale, since my stories share the topic of Vampires and take place in the same world. It is a simple similiarity, but one nonetheless.
  • Since the stories share those two things in common, I think a Frametale makes more sense for my Storybook than an Anthology would.
  • Frametale it is!
Storytelling Approach?
  • For the most part, I am going to use the world that I have created in some of my stories for my weekly storytelling post. I may even use similar characters. But, I will use Summers and the Russin Myths as inspiration for the stories that I will use in the Storybook.
  • My stories that have the world that I will use for my Storybook are The Vampire Prince's Masquerade and Bloodstained Phantom Kisses.
  • The stories will be short First Person stories with a simple plot. 
  • Being a Framework, the stories will share the theme of Vampires, and will be set in the same world, but will each be different stories.

Thursday, September 10, 2015

Extra Reading Diary: Ovid's Metamorphosis Book II

I enjoyed reading Ovid's Metamorphosis Book I so much, that I chose Book II for my extra reading this week!

Ovid's Metamorphosis Book II
Reading A:

  1. Cupid and Dis
  2. Dis and Proserpine
  3. Ceres and Jupiter
  4. Persephone's Fate
  5. Arachne and Minera
  6. Minerva Weaves a Web
  7. Niobe Rejects Latona
  8. The Death of Niobe's Children
  9. Latona and the Lycians
  10. Marysas
(Apollo and Marsyas, Liss)

  • I found this section to be quite difficult to read, and more so than the other book. I'm not sure why that is? So, if I get anything incorrect, that is why.
  • Proserpine was kidnapped by Dis and taken the the Underworld. I really like that concept. A more modern adaptation would be a demon kidnapping someone to Hell.
  • In her search for her daughter, Demeter halts all harvests. This was a neat concept too, the Gods taking it out on the world, and therefore on the humans who inhabit it.
  • Sort of a fiddle contest with the Devil sort of motif with Minerva weaving the web
  • The punishment to Arachne explains why spiders weave webs (also why her name sounds a lot like arachnid)
  • Arache's suicide was peculiar. It seemed like an odd response to what happened. It didn't feel very plausible or believable to me
  • Theme: Pride as a sin, contesting the Gods
  • Latona and the Lycians uses a first person point of view, which is a point of view shift, as the rest of the works have been in third person point of view.
  • Yet another story were the Goddess is insulted. Now, the peasants are turned into frogs as a punishment
  • The last story was just bizarre. It was so grotesque and didn't really seem to have any rhyme or reason! However, I did like that it involved satyrs, as those are a favorite mythological creature of mine.
  • This entire section felt so different from his first books! It almost felt like a different writer. The themes and delivery of it felt so different. 

Wednesday, September 9, 2015

Week 3 Storytelling: Bloodstained Phantom Kisses

(Phantom by: Marc Mathiew)
Bloodstained Phantom Kisses

Each day I wondered if today would be the day that They'd finally kill me.

The cramped jail cell was so cold--cold metal bars, cool stone floor--and it was so quiet that I could hear my blood pumping through my veins.

Only silence, until I heard His voice.

“Hello,” he had whispered. His voice seemed so smooth like the finest fabrics of satin—no, silk.

I jumped, thinking it was my captors. I must have gasped, because he replied, “Don’t worry—I’m not one of Them.. I’m here just like you.”

“Where are you?” I asked, softly.

“Over here,” he said.

I followed his silky voice grasping at it like it was a rope tied with scarves to the wall, until I reached the wall on my right side.

There was a thin crack in the stone wall.

I looked through the crack, and faintly saw warm, chocolate, brown eyes and a smooth smile. His eyes gazed upon me, and we studied each other like a painting. Though, he seemed like the finer painting.

He was a masterpiece to me.

We didn’t say anything else. We just sat, listening to each other’s breaths, and there was something comforting in each exhale, and inhale. Alas, we were alive, for now at least.

His breaths were like a lullaby to me, and I had fallen asleep to it.

The next day I woke to a clatter of a bowl of porridge against the stone floor. They wanted us to eat, because they needed our life, they needed our blood.

Those damn Bloodsuckers owned the world, and we were cattle to them.

I had tried for so long to escape this fate, living in forests with packs of people, we were like wolves.

But just like that, one day, someone forgot to put out the campfire, who was it? Oh well, it doesn’t matter now… After all, they bit into my pack like they were cherries, red blood dripping down the sides of their mouths. And, when the Bloodsuckers were full, they locked the rest of us into cages, so they could eat us later.

I saw the huge, black metal castle, with it’s pointed towers and turrets, before they shoved us into the dungeon of the Vampire King’s Castle.

And I had been alone, until I heard His voice.

“Good morning,” he said softly. Gods, his voice was like honey.

“Well, ‘good’ being a relative term.”

“Another day alive, it is a good day.” I could hear him slurping the porridge from the bowl, and his slow chewing. He smacked his lips with each bite.

I remember someone from my pack eating like that, lips smacking and all, and I’d tell them to stop that. It was an annoying sound before. Now it was comforting. Every sound from him sang to me like music. As he had said, it meant we were alive.

I looked at him through the crack in the wall, and with each day, he seemed as if he were part of the wall. Perhaps the selfish and vain part of me, felt as if he were made there just for me.

Every morning started with his “good morning”, and we talked for days, about nothing really. We didn’t talk about Them, or about who we were before we were prisoners. No, we talked about nonsense like why the sky’s blue, or how clouds are there, or if human’s will ever reclaim the world, and what that would be like.

One day I asked him for his name.

“Thisbe,” he told me. “And you?”

“Pyra.”

He pressed his face against the crack in the wall, and he pursed his lips. I pressed to the crack, but only felt stone.

“I love you, Pyra” He whispered, his warm breathes hitting my lips like phantom kisses.

“And I you.”

We sat there like that for a while. Unable to touch, because of the stone wall between us.

Each day was a good day with him next to me.

But, one day, I awoke, to the clatter of the bowl of porridge dropping on the cool cement.

There was no “good morning” from the cell next to mine. I  didn’t hear his slow chewing, his lips smacking, or his breathing.

My heart lurched as I heard silence from the cell behind me. Like before He was there, all I could hear was my blood pumping and racing through my veins.

“Are you there?” I called out. I didn’t even bother whispering.

There was no reply.

I looked through the crack in the wall, and there were no brown eyes gazing back, or smiling lips. There was only darkness.

“Dammit, you can’t do this to me!” I shouted. “They can’t take you away!”

I punched the wall, the stone hurting my fists, but I didn’t care.

I sat by the wall for a long time, waiting for his breaths, for his silky voice, for anything. Eventually I had hit the wall so hard that a chunk of stone fell down next to me.

I raised the stone up to my eyes. It was sharp like a knife.

Any day now they were going to kill me. And without Him it would be unbearable.

Stone cut my skin until the red blood ran along the cold stone floor, like a river. I lay in my blood, waiting to die like I was waiting to fall asleep. It took longer than I’d thought.

“I’m back,” he said softly, through the crack in the wall.

By now I was so cold, and so tired, and I couldn’t move. I could hardly speak. My life was flooding away from me and onto the cold stone floor.

“I thought they’d killed you…”

“No, they drank from me, but brought me back.”

He must have looked through the crack because he cried out. His voice was shaky as he shouted, “Don’t die on me, please!”

“I'm aorry...but, it’s too late..” I whispered.

I felt my body tearing, like a page was being torn from a book, and my soul separated from my body. I floated away from my body, and saw so much blood around it.

My hands were transparent, as was the rest of my body.

I floated into the cell next to mine, and stood next to Thisbe, but he couldn’t seem me. He had broken off a piece of of stone, himself. I saw so much blood flood from his body, and around him.

His blood seeped under the wall, and into mine. The only part of us in life that had touched, would be in our death.

Thisbe’s soul appeared in next to me. He grabbed my translucent hand, and then pressed his ethereal lips to mine, into a cold phantom kiss. It wasn’t just his voice, his breathes, his sounds. I finally had him, and he had me.

We would be stuck in this jail cell for eternity, but at least he was there with me.

In death we were finally together.
(Image by: Sherry at Astrology Junction)
Author’s Note:
I read Ovid’s Metamorphosis Book I this week, and I absolutely fell in love with the story of Pyramus and Thisbe! I thought, what if the wall between them was because they were in jail cells next to each other? And, ta-da! Also, I gender-bent the two! So, in the original story Pyramus is the guy, and Thisbe is the girl. In this I switched them. I love challenging gender roles and such, so that’s why I did that.

Now, you’re probably wondering: why vampires?

Because, I took the Vampire King’s Castle from my other story, The Vampire Prince’s Masquerade. Check out that story--it’s an entirely different perspective from the “Bloodsuckers” (so-called by Pyra.) Both stories were from the same world, where Vampire’s rule the world, and humans are (as you learned) treated like cattle.

This story was in the perspective of the humans, and it was quite different from The Vampire Prince’s Masquerade,  wasn’t it? The Vampire’s definitely have it better, that’s for sure!

Anyways, the Shakespearean tragic ending was also a nod to the story of Pyramus and Thisbe. However, I’m a sucker for bittersweet endings, if my ending of this story is any indication of that! So, my ending did differ from the original myth, but I think it’s better that way anyway!

Also, I am very excited as I have now created this interesting world. Look forward to future stories in this same world, in perspectives of either vampires, humans, or maybe other creatures as well!



Reading Diary B: Ovid's Metamorphosis Book I

Ovid's Metamorphosis Reading B:
  1. Echo
  2. Narcissus
  3. Pyramus and Thisbe
  4. Mars and Venus
  5. Perseus and Andromeda
  6. Perseus and Medusa
(Echo and Narcissus by: John William Waterhouse)
  • Reading B was a lot darker, which I did enjoy! There was more tragedy, and it felt more like stories than myths rather than how Reading A felt. 
  • I really liked the story of Echo and Narcissus, especially how tragic it was. I love tragic stories, with loves that are not meant to be. I also liked how Echo can only echo words, and in the end became nothing but a literal echo with her body wasting away.
  • Narcissus falling in love with his own visage. He tries to hug himself, and kiss himself, to no avail.
  • He thinks that the man in the water and himself are divided by water
  • He killed himself, saddened by his image leaving him
  • The story of Narcissus could translate well into being about vampires, or also about the "big man on campus" at a high school (you know the guy who rejects all the girls).
  • When Narcissus died he became a flower, which is an interesting concept. People turning into flowers when they die--I like this concept, I might use that for a story.
  • Star-crossed lovers, divided by a wall--this image is great! An interesting concept for a story. Lovers who cannot be together, but live next to each other, with just a wall between them. They can hear each other breath they're so close--yet so far away.
  • How Shakespearean! He thought that a lioness kills his girlfriend (when she had, in fact, ran away, safely,) so he stabs himself--his blood soaking her already blood-soaked garments.
  • His blood stained the mulberries on the trees (I won't look at a mulberry the same way!)
  • She stabs herself, and they are put into a single Urn.
  • Literally catching the lovers in the act
  • Damsel in distress motif, kill this beast and you can marry the girl (How very Arthurian!)
  • Medusa's head on Athena's breastplate



Tuesday, September 8, 2015

Reading Diary A: Ovid's Metamorphoses Book I

Ovid's Metamorphosis Part A:


Reading A:
  • Flood myths
  • I like the idea of the Neriods, which is evidently not a term solely for Neriods of the Sea. It also refers to faeries, mermaids, and nymphs
  • The rocks being thrown, and turning into humans, was an interesting take on the creation of humans
  • Interesting image of the sky in Phaethon (the constellations coming alive and attacking
  • The theme of pushing your limits, and trying to do something that is beyond your powers. Pushing the limits of humanity (via Phaethon)
  • Fire myth (Fire instead of flood!)
  • How about if the fire was caused by someone who isn't divine. I'm thinking Victorian Era, with the great London fire or when Nero supposedly burned Rome down (and played his fiddle as he watched it burn.) The fire was caused by a Vampire (of course.) The vampire will be the villain of the story, and he/she wants to get rid of the humans, so he can replace them with vampires. The fire is a statement more than anything, since he needs to turn the humans into vampires. The protagonist of the story has to stop them before the whole place burns down.
  • Phaethon's story is very reminiscent of Icarus' story
  • The origin of the peacock
  • Many eyes keeping watch
  • Someone turning into a tree, a punishment almost, after grieving
  • Someone turning into a swan, choosing the flood over the fire
  • Nymphs
  • As Professor Gibbs put it, "Jupider's unbridled libido." 
  • Each of Jupider's lovers are punished, but he is never punished. I don't think this is fair at all.
  • Someone turning into a bear, and then becoming a constelation.
  • The bear could be a shapeshifter instead, to add a more supernatual aspect to the myth.
  • Being turned into constellations
  • Disguises, decieving your lover
  • Dionysus, Bacchus (the 'party god' so to say, is very interesting)
  • Secret birth
  • Being raised by nymphs. How would one end up after being raised by nymphs? We see how Bacchus turns out.